The single best writer of BDSM stories that I've found over the last few years
is Kenna. I absolutely adore her work... I'm personally especially fond of the lolita bondage, which she's most prolific on so I'm probably biased with that being my kink.
Nevertheless, I'd like to recommend to you all who have read anything like this to read
"True life, no Really", which I think is an incredibly well pulled-off mindfuck, so many inversions of cliches and tropes... its a self-referential parody of typical stories of its genre, pointing out a lot of the traps that these stories fall in to. It's 51 pages long, so here's a little excerpt:
With daddy fresh from fucking Heidi, Leah came over to daddy. She was ready to try a really big cock. His cock was as big around as Leah’s forearm and even longer. Luckily, his cock was still slick with a mixture of his and Heidi’s cum. “No way is that going where I think you think it’s going,” said daddy as she spread her legs before him. “You’re still a virgin and that won’t fit.”
“Don’t worry, daddy, baby won’t hurt you,” said Leah. She desperately wanted to feel that big cock inside her tight pussy. Ever so gently she scooted forward to put his cock to the entrance to her 8-year-old pussy. The head of his cock pushed past the plump pussy lips, but it looked like trying to fit a steam powered locomotive through a garden hose.
“Oww, ooo,” moaned daddy as he pushed the head of his cock into her virgin love tunnel. “I love you, baby,” he said tentatively, wanting to make her feel better despite his moans of pain. Gradually he worked the head of his cock between her lips and started into that tight hole. As he worked at it, Leah’s pussy stretched, letting him put the head of his cock in. Then he felt suction, as if she was drawing him into her. She was in control.
“I know, daddy,” said Leah as he worked his cock inside her. “And baby loves you, too. You’re being so brave. It might hurt at first, but you’ll see. Once it gets inside me, it will start to feel good.”
“OK, baby,” said Carl, fighting back tears as his cock pushed three inches into her cunt. “Oh, it really hurts, baby,” he said. “But, here it comes, I’m going to put it all the way in you. Let’s get it over with, OK, baby. I want it to start feeling good.”
“That’s my daddy,” said baby. She sucked his cock a little deeper into the incredibly tight space between her thighs. It felt wonderful. She’d never experienced anything like it before. She felt like she was a warm, wet, velvety rock crushing machine with a conveyor belt feeding her what she needed. Before she knew it, she had three inches of his cock buried in her.
“Go for it, baby, I can take it all,” said daddy.
Hearing those words of encouragement, Leah sucked the rest of his cock inside her in one mighty stroke. “You’re all the way in!” she exulted. “You did it.” She hadn’t been sure that it would really fit in such a tight space.
“Oh, baby, baby, it hurts too much. Push it out, push it out. I can’t stand it. It’s not feeling better like you promised. I’m going to implode. Please, get it out, baby.”
“Don’t worry, daddy, it will start to feel good pretty soon.” It didn’t bother her that she had a giant cock inside her. In fact, it felt pretty neat.
“No, it won’t!” squealed the big man, his voice two octaves higher. “Oh, it’s stuck, I can’t get it out. Get it out NOW!”
“OK, daddy, baby’s so sorry. I’m squeezing it out now, OK?”
And even this manages to be erotic most of the time.
She's got one 'secret society' story like the ones previously mentioned in the thread, called
"Triple fun"; judge for yourself if she pulls it off without it seeming terribad
