Chapter 21 Comments

[valar]

AGH ANNE!! I hate Eanwulf so much!!

This emoticon cannot begin to express my disgust and annoyance with him, but it's a start. ~~>

Your not alone, I find myself wishing faylin's alter ego would come out when eanwulf shows up.

[Allroses]

You may be glad to know that Eanwulf is now out of the rest of the chapter. For the remainder of the time we're in his castle, we'll be following Struan's adventures. But it doesn't mean you'll learn to like Eanwulf any more.

[Nuraeariel]

I think you get pleasure from our dislike of Eanwulf, Anne.

And yay, Struan seems interesting!

[Allroses]

That could very well be a true statement. Making a character that is purposefully dislikable is very difficult!

[Allroses]

There will be no Friday update. As I am terrible about getting all my convention crap together if it's not the night before I leave. ^_^;;

[valar]

I think it's starting to dawn on straun just what is going on in that castle, and it seems like he's not going to like what he finds out.

[valar]

I like how straun's expressions on the 4th and 5th panel seem to show a empathetic and concerned side to him.

[Miquaight]

Sorry to drop in with such a random comment but I figured I should say I think you got one of your best expressions so far in the third panel

Ass kissing over

[Allroses]

Sorry to drop in with such a random comment but I figured I should say I think you got one of your best expressions so far in the third panel

Best expressions! Really? I am quite fond of it myself, but I don't know if it's the best! O_O

I like how straun's expressions on the 4th and 5th panel seem to show a empathetic and concerned side to him.

Struan may be a bit of a sexual predator and sociopath, but he does have lines, dammit! And so many of those are being crossed in such a short amount of time....

[Nuraeariel]

Struan is actually attracive in the last panel this time :3

[valar]

Straun's expression seemed to me like a cross between shocked and horrified,which is understandable considering who's castle he's in. The lullaby was quite catchy and fit very well with the last panel.

[Miquaight]

eeeewwww....

[Nuraeariel]

Wow, good work, Anne! You can tell this page too a lot of effort.

[Kaeven]

*laughs at how dark this chapter's turning out to be*

Okay, maybe this chapter'll be more than educational and disturbing.

[Allroses]

I guess people were moved by the update or something, look at all the comments!

What else is it going to be besides educational and disturbing?

Also, the lullaby isn't over yet. There's more verses.

[Kaeven]

Morbid, creepy, dark, and generally vampirically awesome.

More verses? =o
I thinks this whole chapter's gonna rock by default because of the lullaby then, xD

[Allroses]

That's right. lullaby is the best.

Apparently the CG update thing is super slow! Which isn't too bad, because the page wasn't fully shaded any how!

If the queue doesn't start moving by the time the page is finished entirely, I'll post it up here. = )

[Nuraeariel]

I really like how you did the spirits/ghosts, Anne! :3 Very nice!

[valar]

I liked how detailed the ghosts were, they really gave straun something to think about.

[pumpkinskull]

I'm thinking Struan should keep those fetching red highlights in his hair =P