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Heya peeps, just putting this here for further notice. I'll be going back and forth in the comic, making changes to a few of the worse-off pages, mainly in the beginnning prologue, and a few of the chapter one pages. Basically, I'm going in and rewriting the diaglogue and maybe adding more shadows, and, to be redundant, more dialogue that will, hopefully, clarify the story's beginnings. Keep an eye out for new pages, I'll post here when they appear.
As of this writing, pages that I have updated are:
20050326
20050327
20050805
20050814
20051103
20051106
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20050328 finished and off the line once again.
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20050329 has been updated, with snazzy shading to boot! now i'm gonna go watch advent children.
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i re-updated the comics with the dates:
20050327, and
20050814.
i decided that the present page on date 20051113 just plain sucked, and changed that as well. so, a three-fer this update!
whoo, i need to study for my finals now...
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20050330 has been updated. i took a break from studying to finish the work i started on it earlier in the day.
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20050331
20050401
updated!
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20050402
20050403
20050410
20050411
20050718
20050724

whoo, big load of updates! i hope that the city destruction page looks a hell of a lot better than it did before. thanks go to faub for pointing out to me that i should "make it beautiful". i tried. if it's not up to par, i'll go back in at a later date, but now i'm happy with it.
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20051125
20050413
20050619
20050426
20050418
20050417

whew! another long list of updates...i've almost gone through more than a fourth of the archives! cheers!
damn, but my back hurts...
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i'm not dead! i swear! i decided to change a few pages in the third act of chapter 1, so i'll be resubmitting them in a few days, and posting the pages numbers here.

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Pages 20050801, 20050803, and 20050804 changed slightly to fit in with the plot. Cookies to anyone who can guess the changes.
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I've redone the cover page for the whole thing, fixed a bunch of problems on other pages, and have buckled down for the final two finals!

Pages updated:
20050323
20050412
20050508
20050605 (minor changes)
20050612 (changed the dialogue a bit to fix continuity problem)

Until I start updating again, cheers round the table!
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Updated 20060519 because Casper did not look female...so I widened her hips a tad. I may go back and edit it sometime later.

I found a text error on another page and will be going back to fix it within the week.
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Updated dialogue on 20060323.

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20060702 has been updated. I forgot Dani's gun.
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Changing Celeste's dialogue in Chp4 Act1 Pg17 (20070816), come the next comic update on Sunday.
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