Severed Ties ------->The current arc

JTigerclaw · Post by **JTigerclaw** » Tue Feb 06, 2007 2:11 pm

theSuburbanLetdown wrote:She's pretty awesome and is full of sass (sp?)

And she's full of gas... or at least that's how I read it...

Don't mind me, I'm in a weird mood.

Paul Escobar · Post by **Paul Escobar** » Tue Feb 06, 2007 3:20 pm

I guess cooking can be an art, but don't think the actual food is art in itself. Then again, all in all, I'd say I've had more pleasure from food than from oil paintings, so what do I know.

theSuburbanLetdown wrote:My avatar is Midna, who is a character from the newest Zelda game, Twilight Princess. Since it's presumptuous to assume that everyone knows what Zelda is, here's a link to the wiki page for the series:

Ah. Thanks for the links. I knew practically nothing about that (I knew there existed a game series called Legend of Zelda; that's about it).

That's a big hat she's wearing.

TheWhiteWhelk · Post by **TheWhiteWhelk** » Sun Feb 11, 2007 10:58 pm

To hear of someone losing that kind of weight by their own effort is inspiring. Must have been quite the program to accomplish all that in only a year or so.

TheSuburbanLetdown · Post by **TheSuburbanLetdown** » Mon Feb 12, 2007 8:41 am

Yeah, it sure is a hell of a thing.

New page will be up tomorrow if everything goes well.

TheWhiteWhelk · Post by **TheWhiteWhelk** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 9:13 am

"It'll make me enjoy this a whole lot more." Heh. Helluvan opener.
Ryan looks equally disposed to swear his undying love, strangle Evan, show him his latest piece of work, kick him out of bed, or offer to run with him right now. Among other things. And just how long has Ryan been staring at him?

Never Mayhem · Post by **Never Mayhem** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 10:24 am

The style is different... I dunno how to explain it, but the lines aren't the same... it also seems like a few small details have been added to Ryan's face in the fourth panel. Around his eyes, his muzzle... and I could have sworn his ears got bigger!

Yeah, it seems like they're not pissed at each other anymore, which is a relief. Maybe Ryan will present Evan with heart-shaped tofu for Valentine's Day. Yays!

TheSuburbanLetdown · Post by **TheSuburbanLetdown** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 10:42 am

Yeah, I'm experimenting with stuff. I'm trying to change the way I draw eyes so that different characters have distinctly different eye shapes. Ryan has "freckles" now, and the muzzle definition is just a progression to make things look less flat. As for the lines looking different, that's mostly because I haven't touched a brush or pen in like over 2 weeks so that's why they suck. I may need a new brush soon too.

Cats also have large ears, so I made them a little bigger. Maybe too big though. I'll make adjustments as I go.

Yeahduff · Post by **Yeahduff** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 7:48 pm

Ryan's a creepy weirdo.

TheSuburbanLetdown · Post by **TheSuburbanLetdown** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 9:04 pm

It's hard to tell in the pic, but Ryan's hands are on his knees and he's getting up.

Never Mayhem · Post by **Never Mayhem** » Tue Feb 13, 2007 10:25 pm

theSuburbanLetdown wrote:Yeah, I'm experimenting with stuff. I'm trying to change the way I draw eyes so that different characters have distinctly different eye shapes. Ryan has "freckles" now, and the muzzle definition is just a progression to make things look less flat.

Ah, I see now. It's an improvement, I think, but yeah, you gotta get another brush, too. Ryan benefited from the concept.

Paul Escobar · Post by **Paul Escobar** » Wed Feb 14, 2007 5:20 am

The plot thickens.

The text looks fine btw. It's a little smaller than on previous pages, but still perfectly readable.

Bloodied Fox · Post by **Bloodied Fox** » Wed Feb 14, 2007 8:59 am

Why do I sense imminent dickishness?

Vivisection_bob · Post by **Vivisection_bob** » Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:08 pm

My god. This is like the beginning of a snuff film.

TheSuburbanLetdown · Post by **TheSuburbanLetdown** » Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:26 pm

Vivisection_bob wrote:My god. This is like the beginning of a snuff film.

EEP! I meant it to be creepy, but not like that.

Fallen_angel · Post by **Fallen_angel** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 3:25 am

Snuff film? or College Porn Flick?

...

THINK ABOUT IT!

TheSuburbanLetdown · Post by **TheSuburbanLetdown** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 9:29 am

Wait till you see tomorrow's page. That is if I can remember how to draw before tonight.

Bloodied Fox · Post by **Bloodied Fox** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:02 am

fallen_angel wrote:Snuff film? or College Porn Flick?

...

THINK ABOUT IT!

Those are my happy thoughts

TheWhiteWhelk · Post by **TheWhiteWhelk** » Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:02 am

Not doing very much to persuade us otherwise, is he?

Paul Escobar · Post by **Paul Escobar** » Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:35 pm

Holy shit.

... and the final panel is really creepy.

Never Mayhem · Post by **Never Mayhem** » Tue Feb 20, 2007 5:11 pm

I didn't think Ryan was going to flat out attack Li. Has he gone bonkers then? Suddenly he's looking really ugly, both on the inside and out. Weird...