Trials in the Light

[Inshue]

Hmmm.... Let's do this again. I like whoring myself out for readers.
...no, I don't.

Trials in the Light is loosely based on Final Fantasy, the original. If you're not familiar with the story...
The world is falling apart. Monsters and villainous men abound, with no clear cause in sight. Lands rot, people die, and day by day, it worsens. The only hope of the people is in a prophecy, of four Light Warriors, each bearing the Crystals of Destiny; one for Earth, Fire, Water and Air. But the prophecy was wrong.
There are, in fact, six warriors. The extra two carry the Light and Shadow crystals, and seem to know more than the others about their destiny.

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[Kit630]

Nice, I like the art style here definately. I only read a few of the pages and browsed the rest, but I can tell that I will definately be back to read this (It's late ;3)

I always did like the original Final Fantasy. I'll be back with some proper feedback.

[Inshue]

Hey, thanks! Always good to see people actually replying to these. Glad to hear that you like it.

[Kit630]

So far, so good. I like how you're sticking loosely to the story of the game, and I like the back story for fighter so far. The styles change drastically though, and I can't decide which I like better. They're both interesting. That picture of Garland was sweet.

As a criticism, I think it would be a good idea to use thicker lines to ink around the characters though. But hey, solid story and good style(s). I hope Shaarak gets what is coming to him ;3