Jager Rising - C&C-

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Jager Rising - C&C-

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Jager Rising

High Flying action, World Threatening Prophecies and High School.....

Summary: Jager High gets a new student and the local Fight Rings get a rivaling champion, Kaza aka bloody Knuckles. Kaza soon finds that school and her hobby of Street Fighting are getting too acquainted...


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Wow! The art is really gorgeous, and the story was enjoyable. There's nothing really that I can critique in that aspect.

My only problem, really, was a few grammatical mistakes here or there. Obviously they weren't irritating enough to stop me, though, seeing as I read your whole archives.

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Thanks for the response. ^^ I'm going to try to get all the grammer/spelling problems fixed on next update.

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