Firstly the comic is based off of a role playing game, called Fading suns that I have been playing in for the last two years at university. The year is 4999 and the universe has gone back to a new Dark Age, the Church of the Celestial Sun is all powerful and technology is heavily frowned upon, only a select few may use it.
The comic follows the crew and passengers of the ship Partially Indebted, as the current captain attempts to fulfill certain terms in a dead captains will in order to claim the ship as hers. A lawyer is watching her over one shoulder to make sure she fulfills these terms, and a priest is watching her over the other to try and keep her safe and make her see sense. There are giant rat like vermin on the ship and the only game to play on the ships computer is chess, which the computer is suspiciously good at.
While I really do want comments and critique and such there are a couple of things I do already know (but any extra hints would be appreciated
)1.That chapter 1 is a little jumpy story wise, I need to work more on making pages flow better.
2.Please don't comment to much on the first 10 pages, this whole chapter has been a giant learning curve for me art wise and the first 10 pages aren't anywhere near the standard that I'm drawing at now.
So finally heres the link:
<a href="http://partiallyindebted.comicgenesis.com/"> Partially Indebted</a>
