Kotta Kokoro

[Naotaro]

Hi, this is my scond time here. Last time i only had five pages when I posted...>_< But i now have more! so this is,
-KOTTA KOKORO.
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-Basically, a story of a boy named Daichi and his friend Ken who is learning more and more of Daichi's family and what it hold and hides....uh yea. Then some bad guys will come along and go HIYAAAAAA! (aka, I'm making it up as I go along ^_^;)
http://kottakokoro.keenspace.com

[Bass Master Fei]

This is pretty interesting. I... like it.

Although I think that has more to do with the guy with no arms than anything else.

A few website issues: You seem to have some random web address sticking out at the bottom of your page. Also, some cast and other information would be nice.

Other than that, keep it up. I'm kinda impressed by the beginning.

[Levi-chan]

Hey there!

I just checked it out - and I have to admit, I was pretty skeptic about it at first (heck, i'm defaulted to skeptic.) but it's pretty good, man.

The panelling is pretty sweet; there are a few niggles anatomy-wise - but maybe i'm just being dicky. Will link.

Also - your http://kottakokoro.keenspace.com/d/20050226.html and http://kottakokoro.keenspace.com/d/20050225.html are identical.

-L

[Wp]

It's good to see some shounen action mangas out there. It's interestingly hard to find action mangas without a lot of detailed action, probably because people don't have a firm grasp of anatomy in motion (although I find it actually easier to draw action). I hope to join your ranks soon.

[Prapim]

Hi!! I'm pretty bad at this so forgive me if I sound too rude.

I'd like to say I like the sense of humour

The art's also very good- I'm very impressed with the action lines and all- how do you do those? Seeing as I'm total rubbish with drawing action, I'm curious.

However...I have a suggestion- try to make more shadows for the faces of the characters- you already have shadows for clothes. Currently the faces are a bit flat-looking...adding shadows to the face, hair etc. will make it much more 3-D!