Meet The Dweebles...for the first time

[IanA]

Ok seriously people I would love some feedback from anybody thats been in this game for awhile. Any sort of constructive - or destructive - criticism would be a godsend. The link is HTTP://www.dweebles.com please go there and tell me what you think.

In other words. LOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITMELOOKITME....

sometimes I'm an attention whore.... now is one of those times.

[Ferguson]

Funny stuff, I like the comic so far.

I am curious to know how you create them?

[IanA]

I create a body template in Photoshop using vectors and then slide them into a template I set up for the actual strip, its very similar to Men in Hats but I use wicked VooDoo magics as well...

[Jellybeansniper]

that was...strange. i only read until the telethon and it's...weird. all the chicks have c-cups (ah...ha...ha...), and it's very violent. but i do like the beatles-reference for a name.

[Catgirldo]

I read the whole thing... lot of hard work there...
good things and not so good things....

Mantra... "Shorter and funnier".. say it 5 times and then rewrite. (trust me)

I Like the style... it's kind of a "South Park style " and you seem to have a Kyle character... just don't lose your uniqueness.

Don' t over write the jokes.
Also... it is VERY random.... usually there's some kind of story or plot (even in South Park)

Even having read the entire archieve I'm not sure what it's all about. Perhaps it needs a focus?

And Yes... I used to do this...and got paid and was adored by millions.... (really!)


CAT

[Spools]

Keep It Simple.

Not too simple. I'd like to see some fancier people-drawing and subtler colors. Maybe get yourself a pencil or something.

Some of the setups need to be far more cleaarly explained. Very amusing, though.

[Corgan_dane]

I like it, actually. It's a bit disjointed...not really connected, but obviously connected.

Like that sentence I just typed. Ugh.

Anyway, I was going to mention the men-in-hats-ish look, but I think that's alright, yours is different enough for it not to be a problem.



That's right, I said " ."

[IanA]

Well I kinda did rip off the Men in Hat's style, tried to alter it enough so that its ust an homage and not legality biting me in my pahtookus. Love MIH. Not gonna be getting a pencil anytime soon cuz well its all done on my computer and pencil + computer = fried CPU...well if you do it right it does. Thanks to everybody for the input.