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hey guys, i've been working on my comic middle man for a while, and i just moved it here from geocities. it's at

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http://jellybeansniper.keenspace.com


the comic is about an adventurer traveling with his girlfriend and his best friend who has a crush on him. of course, the girlfriend and best friend are sisters. that's how it starts, and it has a series of plot twists, needing a new summary every season. i'm only at issue #27 right now, but hopefully some of the pictures and fan fics can compensate for it.

reply to give me any feedback (positive or negative), or e-mail me at beedowatanabe@hotmail.com.
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so...if i delete the pole, do you think maybe more people will actually read/reply? or is my comic that much of a waste of time (by the way, if it doesn't want to work on keenspace, go to http://www.geocities.com/jellybeansniper/archives.html to read some of the older episodes until i can fix it).[/url]
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fixed!

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i fixed the site, so now you can see it how it should be viewed...i hope.
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Very cute concept I just think the music on the page is a little bothersome. I like your art its a very cute style I just think the start could use some work.
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thanks

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yeah, the beginning issues suck, i'm gonna redraw them someday. as for the background music, i'm still looking for something else (that song sounded good the first time). i can't find a midi for "my december", so i'm not sure what else to use. thanks for the opinion tho, at least someone's looking at the site ^.^
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The Drawing style is very cute =3
I like how the two girls interact with each other^^
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w00t! lol

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ty very much. i didn't know people liked two sisters being at each other's throats tho lol. anyways, i've re-drawn the first comic, and i'll hopefully finish up the rest of the first season by october (i have to keep up my tuesday/thursday routine of course), and i'm still looking for a new bg sound (no one likes the michael jackson i see...). and trust me, two years ago when i was watching dbz and drawing like that, i never expected my art to be cute, but i'm glad it is. i'll take azumanga daioh style over dbz style anyday ^.^
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MJ is the fahshizle

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I like the Michael Jackson song =3
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your comic makes mine look bad lol. it's evil and not evil and...i'm very confused lol. i really need to use better programs than MS paint, and i need a new scanner...and i need...ummm...alot more stuffs
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I haven't advertised my comic series yet because it's currently too blah. My first two chapters (which are the only two up at the moment) are pretty boring compared to the later funnier and crazier stuff that's coming up =3 Now the Fred's finally in the story everything's really gonna liven up and fall into place.

I'm workin on Chapter 3 right now which is one of my favorites XD
Thanks for takin the time to read my stuff I have up so far ^^
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no prob, i gotta finish up reading it, and i'm gonna put a link on my links page too, so on the off chance anyone goes to my site, they can see yours too. heh heh, awright (sorry, too much family guy).
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Coolness, once I actually make a links page I'll put up a link to your site too =3
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pokemon leaf green...

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sure, as if it's not gonna be hard enough for me to get all these remakes done, now school starts tuesday, and pokemon comes out the same day. it'll get done though... (can you tell i'm trying ANYTHING to keep this up near the top? lol) the issue 2 remake is almost done, but i gotta start something for this week's episodes before i do anything more.
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Make the sound optional please :oops:
Not everyone checks websites at their own house hehe :)

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all gone

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dere, i deleted it :wink:
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Post by Justin3000 »

Nice comic sir. Although I'm not a manga fan, so the style didn't really suit me, but I appreciate what it is you're doing. Keep on keeping on.

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sir? wow, you're makin' me feel old now. :o
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Post by Kureji »

Wow that music is something... ;\ Please have none or make it an option... Or at least not on every page... I had to mute my speakers to read the comic...

That first girl was... pathetic ;\ I wouldn't have been depressed for a year and a half over something like that... If she left that easily she wasn't worth it... and that other girl sure is straight forward ;) Poor Sensitive wolf guy...
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yeah, i only put the music up cause of star wars, i'll delete it ASAP. and no comics this week? stupid college...
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Ok, I'm throwing in a sprite comic (with the Middle Man characters). This way I'll have time to let my drawing skillz rest, while keeping my writing at its peak.
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