Of Something and Nothing in Particular

Ohemgee · Post by **Ohemgee** » Sun Sep 02, 2007 3:03 pm

I'm afraid it's only twenty comics

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This is a smaller version of a comic:

It's mostly about these two teenagers, Kim, and Monica, and they (eventually) will have wacky adventures, accompanied by Helk, a ...something.

I update thursdays and saturdays, and I've already drawn many comics so even if I get sick or something, updates shall continue. There isn't much of a plot now, but there will be. It's already been drawn.

the site is http://osanip.comicgenesis.com. I'd love to know what you guys think

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Adobedragon · Post by **Adobedragon** » Thu Sep 06, 2007 2:31 pm

Heh. Your comic is cute and quirky. I like Helk's ambiguity and there are points where the comic is quite funny. Like <a href="http://osanip.comicgenesis.com/d/20070825.html">here</a>, where Helk is easily amused with technology. Or the dangers of <a href="http://osanip.comicgenesis.com/d/200707 ... ">blurting out Harry Potter spoilers.</a> Or this <a href="http://osanip.comicgenesis.com/d/20070712.html">one</a>, that makes fun of "Don't Go There."

I like the simplicity of the drawing style. I would, however, suggest that you work in a little more detail on the backgrounds to give the humor more context. Now that you've passed the 20-page hurdle, you might think about adding bonus pages-Cast, Archive--etc. to dress up your site.

Best of luck and keep drawing.

Cheers.

Ohemgee · Post by **Ohemgee** » Thu Sep 06, 2007 5:02 pm

I'm glad you like it

and working on my backgrounds is now on my to do list, thank you for your feedback

The banner *is* actually the navigation bar, and clicking on the characters brings you to the archives, cast, and 'about'. I was wondering if it was too unclear, but I will label those now.

Adobedragon · Post by **Adobedragon** » Fri Sep 07, 2007 7:40 am

Ohemgee wrote:The banner *is* actually the navigation bar, and clicking on the characters brings you to the archives, cast, and 'about'. I was wondering if it was too unclear, but I will label those now.

Ah, I see. Yeah...seeing as how I'm not the sharpest knife in the drawer, that's way too subtle for me.

Datachasers · Post by **Datachasers** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 10:56 am

adobedragon wrote:
Ohemgee wrote:The banner *is* actually the navigation bar, and clicking on the characters brings you to the archives, cast, and 'about'. I was wondering if it was too unclear, but I will label those now.
Ah, I see. Yeah...seeing as how I'm not the sharpest knife in the drawer, that's way too subtle for me.

i didnt catch that eather -
i think perhaps lables or buttons would be best ( silly brains we dont need those *toss* )

PS i do like this comic **** ( color would make it a four + star )