JUDE- A new Sci-Fi/Fantasy Action comic.

Victorian washbasin · Post by **Victorian washbasin** » Tue May 30, 2006 1:52 am

Hey, just asking for any constructive feedback on my new webcomic. You can read #1 and #2 here: http://www.darkheartstudios.co.uk , and #3-4 are finished and sitting on my desk. Hope you ejoy and look forward to any advice.

Lars · Post by **Lars** » Tue May 30, 2006 7:24 am

Hi there!

Sorry to say this, but I didn't read any of your stuff yet. I'm sitting in an internetcafe right now and I found your site-navigation and especially the fact that it is in Flash very annyoing. Something faster less fancy would be more!

I'll check out your content soon!

Mr. Caravaggio · Post by **Mr. Caravaggio** » Tue May 30, 2006 10:30 am

I've got no problems with flash setups, they're typically faster. But I would suggest getting one of those "tag" setups so people can save their spaces if their reading through the archive. Go to Girly and look at the bottom tag menu for what I'm talking about, I'm now sure how it works, but it'd help.

As for the comic. I like work that doesn't make sense immediately, so this could be good. I'd suggest coloring it digitally, or at least smoothly, but I think the colored pencil like look helps give it a humor. If this kind of thing were too serious it'd chance becoming stale.

Jin-roh · Post by **Jin-roh** » Tue May 30, 2006 3:38 pm

Nice set up for the site, that really grabbed everyone's attention. As for the comic itself, I need to see more before I can say anything.