Questions, Comments, Criticism

[Nineswords]

Go me. I deleted the whole freaking thread. But fortunately, sensing that error was nigh, i pasted my comments into notepad so i could put them back up here should a glitch cause them to be lost. Glitches happening soooooo very much tonight.

Anyway, this is for comments from you guys, and questions if you have any (and i'll answer what i can) and criticism, preferably of the constructive kind. I like crits, so bring them on.

[Nineswords]

Sorry i couldn't save the messages this was a reply to. They made me happy and now i am sad. But here was what i said:

Answering mulitiple things here to like.... save trees... and stuff.

To Joozika:

Thank you, i am glad you like! There's an alternate version of that panel in my elfwood gallery. Well, not "alternate" so much as "joke" version. http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/zone/h/o/ ... d.jpg.html i think... elfwood is down at the moment.

I agree with you too, dynamics is definitely not my fort

[Lhynnith]

Okay, here's my criticism for this week: EEEEEEWWW!

I made a bolognaise that went 'splop' once. It looked a lot like Vanchek's head. I request a PG rating for similar scenes in future: 'Warning: May Contain Goozy Stuff. Dahmiel About To Blow Shit Up.'

Now to the vaguely constructive part of the post. I have a question from last week's strip, which I was going to ask last week: can you translate Riley's spell from pretty Dahmiel-script into English? (No, I won't blow off anyone's head with it. Promise.) The public has a right to know. Actually, I just want to know. Pretty please?

By the way, I think I've pinpointed your two best drawing skills now: shadows and gunk. Your gunk is very gunky. Especially in the last panel this week - the popped-out eye and bit of scalp with hair on it are, um, yuck.

[Nineswords]

Oooh, thank you. Glad you liked my gunk.

And yes. Yes i could translate the Dahmiel. But i won't. It wouldn't be any fun that way, trust me.

But i will consider warnings before exploding anyone else's head ;)