So...there's a bomb on the station. Does this devastating plot twist chill you to your very marrow? Or are you going, "Wait, why are the Amazons there again?"
C'mon, I want feedback. Good, bad, ugly.
Also, if you keep your eyes peeled, you might start to notice something vaguely resembling a theme to this story. What's next, dramatic irony? Resonance? Foreshadowing?