The easy answer is to bring back the Career Opportunities era enormous rack.
The less pandering answer would probably run somewhere along the lines of less sautrated shading. If it's a dirty post apocalyptic then you'll probably want a slight shade of sepia of some things, or at least take down the intensity of blues like her pants a bit.
Anatomically, it's really just preference, but recently I've started becoming confused at the comic tendancy to elongate people's legs and shorten the torso.
The second character is somehow less engaging, maybe because most of her personality seems to be transmitted through her choice of clothing, or lack thereof. I don't think the hygine in a post apocalyptic world would be good enough to let women where things like that.
The bullet wrap doesn't seem to be falling around her as much as it might.
You've got shading on her, but it's fairly general. It'd take more time, so it's really just an option, but you might try using smaller brushes to get around individual shapes like the gun or even screws.
TheBladeRoden2 wrote:Yeah, I tried googling her too but it was hard finding a SFW pic.
That makes living in this world sound so much better than it actually is. You must have your google filters turned off.