a fan art, critique please

Enef · Post by **Enef** » Sat May 21, 2005 6:55 am

any crticism will be taken well

just please dont say get a scanner,i know i need one

LibertyCabbage · Post by **LibertyCabbage** » Sat May 21, 2005 8:16 am

Um, it looks like his right hand is holding the sword by the blade which is... bad.

I dunno about art enough to comment on the rest

SquirtEryna · Post by **SquirtEryna** » Sat May 21, 2005 8:20 am

is that samurai jack? i'm sorry i don't watch cartoons enough. perhaps you get a clearer pic of it?
from what I can see the lines look clean and neat.

Ida · Post by **Ida** » Sat May 21, 2005 8:30 am

From what i can see, this looks very nice a and stylish... but then again, it's hard to really see anything. Maybe you could stick the picture to a wall in better lighted room to take a picture? At least that way the paper wouldn't bend like it does in this picture. Uhm, yeah... The only thing I think I can see is that his front foot seems to be smaller than the one in the back, where it should really be the opposite. But that might just be my eyes fooling me.

Angelmonster · Post by **Angelmonster** » Sat May 21, 2005 8:56 am

Its too blurry to critique this. The only thing I can say is his one leg, the one on his right, looks like his foot broke off :-/ Its too far forward and you wouldnt see the whole bottom of his sandal.

Dotty · Post by **Dotty** » Sat May 21, 2005 10:23 am

LibertyCabbage wrote:Um, it looks like his right hand is holding the sword by the blade which is... bad.

I dunno about art enough to comment on the rest

....no it doesn't. The hilt is right above the right hand >_>

I like it, but a clearer picture would be really helpful. Not that I just want to see it clearer cause Samurai Jack kicks ass. No, not like that at all.

PhoenixIncarnate · Post by **PhoenixIncarnate** » Sat May 21, 2005 10:39 am

Ergh, too blurry to get a very accurate critique out of me . . . that foot is definately gimpy, it needs to be facing more straight ahead.

Actually, on second glance, I think I see what you're doing. Yes, the foot's angle is probably right for what you wanted to do, but you need to add perspective. He's charging, so that foot is farther forward - therefore, you need to draw it proportionally larger than the back foot. As is, it looks like he's standing on his heel at an impossible angle.

I would have said something about his back shoulder rising so far over his head, but then I remembered this is Samurai Jack and the laws of physics and proportions are different for his universe.

LibertyCabbage · Post by **LibertyCabbage** » Sat May 21, 2005 10:46 am

ahhh, i see it now... it's obvious now that i realize it... tt

Subhuman · Post by **Subhuman** » Sat May 21, 2005 11:25 am

Yeah, the left leg (his left) is bent, obviously, but you need to show that with a fold in the clothing.

Otherwise, good. Nice clean lines.

Chibiartstudios · Post by **Chibiartstudios** » Sun May 22, 2005 12:09 am

Get a scanner! HAHAHAHA-

*gets stabbed*

Er- Right!

It looks pretty good actually. Very dinamic. I like it alot. No complaints here.

Enef · Post by **Enef** » Sun May 22, 2005 1:42 am

thanks guys, i am saving up for a scanner so it shouldnt be too long till i can get this on the computer good enough for u all to comment properly

Jackhass · Post by **Jackhass** » Sun May 22, 2005 2:48 am

Can't see it too clearly...

...but from what I can see, it's fairly good.