Sketch vs Art

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Grave
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Sketch vs Art

Post by Grave »

Hmm. Im the new guy.

This is a series I began years ago, on paper. I love sketch so much i started re-creating the comics on the comp. And i have all the photo software, but I chose to do this one in the oh so primative 'paint'. I think it suits the two toons fairly well.

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Page One
Page Two
Page three

I edited them in photoshop...for the halftone effect...and some lights


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Post by Nutcracker »

Somebody should move this to TT&T.
I think the action is a bit too fast.

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Moving to TT&T
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Post by Pylon »

I agree with Nutcracker. Everything's going on so fast, I really don't know what's going on at all. Some kind of sketch coming to life?

Also, each page by itself is huge, both in dimensions and loading. It is not good when your smallest comic is 400 by 600 and is 240 kb. Some of the others were almost 700 by 1100 and ate anywhere from 160 to 180 kb. They're just too huge. Downsize them just a tad, because even if you don't care about the time it would take to load these beasts, at 400 by 600 that's filling my screen that I have set to 1280 by 800, that is bad.

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I don't know why you chose to use Paint, but choose not to...Paint comics look cheesy.
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normally i want to punch jackhass in the eyes, but today, i agree with him. its not a good look.
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