NEED SOME FEEDBAVK PLEASE

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TATMAN
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NEED SOME FEEDBAVK PLEASE

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Here is an excerpt from Areana (My Comic) It's a picture of Areana herself, The Queen Of Darkness. Please let me know what you think.[/img][/quote]

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I think there was an error with your post. I don't see an image.

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Post by Toxic »

I was going to give you some feedback, but the large number of typos in your post scared me away.



Just kidding. I like your style. Very religious themed. But you need to work on faces. All your characters look like they got botched face lifts.
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