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dhl262
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by dhl262 » Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:02 pm
http://www.dainlee.blogspot.com
I've only done about 10 comics, and I need some feedback on how I'm doing so far.
Any suggestions would be appreciated. I post a new comic everyday. Thanks.
P.S. Will be buying a domain name soon.
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by W M » Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:07 pm
I love it! The post-it seems to be a conventional way to make a simple one-panel gag, which you've executed very well. The drawing style is lighthearted, and the scenes are witty. This idea has some serious potential, but I would like to see a truly original site layout for it rather than just a white page(however, I do like multiple post-its to a page. I makes me keep on reading). Please continue!
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by VinnieD » Mon Aug 10, 2009 9:31 pm
Reminds me of XKCD. But the post it thing does have a sort of minimalist appeal. Working with limited resources really brings out the creativity.
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by dhl262 » Tue Aug 18, 2009 9:55 pm
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by Webkilla » Fri Aug 21, 2009 8:07 am
i laughed
make more
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by Aster Azul » Fri Aug 21, 2009 9:50 am
Ee, I like this idea!! I've been playing a lot with minimalism and deconstruction, they're really fun and easy to think of ideas for, but sometimes you come up with stuff applicable elsewhere to, it's great exercise.
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by Aster Azul » Fri Aug 21, 2009 9:53 am
Ee, I like this idea!! I've been playing a lot with minimalism and deconstruction, they're really fun and easy to think of ideas for, but sometimes you come up with stuff applicable elsewhere to, it's great exercise.
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by Charlos777 » Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:26 pm
UGS ATTACK! NOOOOOOOoooooo! POST IT CARTOONS YYYEEEEEESSSSSSS!
I hope your not expecting me to make a joke not related to ninjas, pirates, Jesus, cyborgs, or a combination of all of those.
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by VeryCuddlyCornpone » Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:36 pm
Charlos777 wrote: UGS ATTACK! NOOOOOOOoooooo! POST IT CARTOONS YYYEEEEEESSSSSSS!
CMON CHARLOS YOU KNOW YOU WANT THEM SO WARM AND FUZZY ON THE INSIDE SO HIP AND FASHIONABLE ON THE OUTSIDE
Don't kid yourself, friend. I still know how.
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by Charlos777 » Sat Nov 21, 2009 2:33 pm
VeryCuddlyCornpone wrote: Charlos777 wrote: UGS ATTACK! NOOOOOOOoooooo! POST IT CARTOONS YYYEEEEEESSSSSSS!
CMON CHARLOS YOU KNOW YOU WANT THEM SO WARM AND FUZZY ON THE INSIDE SO HIP AND FASHIONABLE ON THE OUTSIDE
You raise an interesting point, but it would seem as though the Ugs have retreated. So we shall never know how that would have turned up now.
I keep thinking that I've seen this idea somewhere though, or am i just jealous because I never thought of the post it comics on my own?
I hope your not expecting me to make a joke not related to ninjas, pirates, Jesus, cyborgs, or a combination of all of those.
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by xuniperx » Thu Dec 17, 2009 11:43 am
Ahhhaaah! Brilliant! I wish I could of thought about doing the same... =[