A Questor Keeps His Promise
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A Questor Keeps His Promise
Here's another take on that incredible fight scene:
http://home.columbus.rr.com/bluebear/im ... uestor.png
Edit note: I redid the text editing to include the entire promise.
http://home.columbus.rr.com/bluebear/im ... uestor.png
Edit note: I redid the text editing to include the entire promise.
Last edited by Maxgoof on Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:39 am, edited 1 time in total.
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"You gotta be loose...relaxed...with your feet apart, and...Ten o'clock. Two o'clock. Quarter to three! Tour jete! Twist! Over! Pas de deux! I'm a little teapot! And the windup...and let 'er fly! The Perfect Cast!" --Goofy
"You gotta be loose...relaxed...with your feet apart, and...Ten o'clock. Two o'clock. Quarter to three! Tour jete! Twist! Over! Pas de deux! I'm a little teapot! And the windup...and let 'er fly! The Perfect Cast!" --Goofy
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Re: A Questor Keeps His Promise
Wow... that works just as well. Nice edit. If there were room for two different sets of narration boxes, you could have both Quentyn's prayer as he fought and this dialogue, for a nice contrast...maxgoof wrote:Here's another take on that incredible fight scene:
http://home.columbus.rr.com/bluebear/im ... uestor.png
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Very interesting, But Ralphs version is the best.
Yes, sir. I agree completely. It takes a well-balanced individual... such as yourself to rule the world. No, sir. No one knows that you were the third one... Solidus. ...What should I do about the woman? Yes sir. I'll keep her under surveillance. Yes. Thank you. Good-bye...... Mr. President.
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I agree. I just wanted to show just how apropos Quentyn's promise to Colin really was.SolidusRaccoon wrote:Very interesting, But Ralphs version is the best.
Quentyn now has two people who will always look up to him with awe--Colin and Nessie.
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"You gotta be loose...relaxed...with your feet apart, and...Ten o'clock. Two o'clock. Quarter to three! Tour jete! Twist! Over! Pas de deux! I'm a little teapot! And the windup...and let 'er fly! The Perfect Cast!" --Goofy
"You gotta be loose...relaxed...with your feet apart, and...Ten o'clock. Two o'clock. Quarter to three! Tour jete! Twist! Over! Pas de deux! I'm a little teapot! And the windup...and let 'er fly! The Perfect Cast!" --Goofy
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Yup, the Kid has really shown his stuffmaxgoof wrote:I agree. I just wanted to show just how apropos Quentyn's promise to Colin really was.SolidusRaccoon wrote:Very interesting, But Ralphs version is the best.
Quentyn now has two people who will always look up to him with awe--Colin and Nessie.
Yes, sir. I agree completely. It takes a well-balanced individual... such as yourself to rule the world. No, sir. No one knows that you were the third one... Solidus. ...What should I do about the woman? Yes sir. I'll keep her under surveillance. Yes. Thank you. Good-bye...... Mr. President.
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Observation
It works beautifully that the two characters who owe the most to Quentyn are both younger than himself. As the hero of the day, Quentyn can enjoy a somewhat condescending, if sincere, congratulation from the adults in his community, but to be really and lastingly respected, it takes those who are growing up with him, and can thus take him fully seriously as one of themselves.
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Maybe they will follow in his footsteps.
Yes, sir. I agree completely. It takes a well-balanced individual... such as yourself to rule the world. No, sir. No one knows that you were the third one... Solidus. ...What should I do about the woman? Yes sir. I'll keep her under surveillance. Yes. Thank you. Good-bye...... Mr. President.
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"When gone am I, the last of the Questors will you be. Pass on what you have learned."SolidusRaccoon wrote:Maybe they will follow in his footsteps.
Sorry, somebody had to say it.
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"You gotta be loose...relaxed...with your feet apart, and...Ten o'clock. Two o'clock. Quarter to three! Tour jete! Twist! Over! Pas de deux! I'm a little teapot! And the windup...and let 'er fly! The Perfect Cast!" --Goofy
"You gotta be loose...relaxed...with your feet apart, and...Ten o'clock. Two o'clock. Quarter to three! Tour jete! Twist! Over! Pas de deux! I'm a little teapot! And the windup...and let 'er fly! The Perfect Cast!" --Goofy
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Yes, sir. I agree completely. It takes a well-balanced individual... such as yourself to rule the world. No, sir. No one knows that you were the third one... Solidus. ...What should I do about the woman? Yes sir. I'll keep her under surveillance. Yes. Thank you. Good-bye...... Mr. President.
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"Let us hear the conclusion of the whole matter: Fear God and keep His commandments, for this is man's all. For God will bring every work into judgement, including every secret thing, whether good or evil." Ecclesiates 12:10
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Indeed I am, you all knoe they are working for The Penguin.Narnian wrote:Is Solidus beating up on nuns again?Astral wrote:YaySolidus kicked the habbit! w00t!
Yes, sir. I agree completely. It takes a well-balanced individual... such as yourself to rule the world. No, sir. No one knows that you were the third one... Solidus. ...What should I do about the woman? Yes sir. I'll keep her under surveillance. Yes. Thank you. Good-bye...... Mr. President.
Beating up on nuns can be habit-deforming...SolidusRaccoon wrote:Indeed I am, you all knoe they are working for The Penguin.Narnian wrote:Is Solidus beating up on nuns again?Astral wrote:YaySolidus kicked the habbit! w00t!
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