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Catherine Murdock wrote: No. We do not!
Ben Flowers wrote: Come on Caths, it'll be fun!
Catherine Murdock wrote: I also recall that you said Lesbian Vampire Killers was a comedy.
Zophia wrote: Catherine: the exact number of reanimated corpses from hosts that BAIT identities as 'lesbian' is
*Ahem?*
Alright, this is NOT an alternative to Serge's Review Thread. If you want a detailed and comprehensive review, poke Serge till he bleeds.

Mostly, I want to do this is a method to improve my writing skills-
Ben Flowers wrote: Oi! Limaball is pretty good-
-and my comic drawing skills, by dragging myself and my chars kicking and screaming out of my (and their) comfort zone. So what I will do is let my chars take a look at your work, then I'll draw a mini-comic of a handful of frames to sum up what they think.
Catherine Murdock wrote: *Sigh* I still don't quite understand where you're going with this Red! Comics are for teenagers! Do you want me to 'review' yet another action hero with bulging muscles or enormous cleavage-
Ben Flowers wrote: Caaaaaths! There's more to comics than just superheros!
Catherine Murdock wrote: Really.
Zophia wrote: Comrades? I am not programmed for peer review of creative work!
OK, this is how I want to do this.
1) Give me the URL to the comic that you want them to review (and yes, I want your comic, as much as Ben loves CAD...)
Ben Flowers wrote: Heh, I should get paid for this.
2) I want you to choose who you want to review your comic. Here are the profiles of each character to choose from:
Catherine "Caths" Murdock
Catherine Murdock wrote: Please, Red, if you value your manhood, don't call me Caths.
Ben Flowers (II)
Ben Flowers wrote: Gack! Way to rub that in! Thanks!
Look, what you are ain't nothing to be ashamed of
Ben Flowers wrote: So what happened to your father then!? Photographic memory, Red.
And Zophia-
Zophia wrote: KD-1166654153-B-
-We get the hint. I'll let you choose whether you want either one character, two characters or all three review your work.

To give some insight:
Catherine is not a fan of webcomics, I can't really say if she'll read your strip at all.
Catherine Murdock wrote: Oh don't be so harsh! I'm not some sort of heartless cretin. *sigh* I promise, that to the 'best' of my ability, I will take a look at your action heros and your poorly written dialogue. Will that make you feel any better?
Ben is a fan of comics, but I don't vouch for his taste.
Ben Flowers wrote: "There's nothing bloody wrong with a miscarriage subplot!"
Hey! Bloody miscarriages! Never thought of that one!
Ben Flowers wrote: You're a sick man sometimes. Anyways, I'll take a look around, see what I drag out. Heh. I'm not getting paid for this, so I'm not going to try writing a novel or memorising the storyline or something.
Zophia is a floating analysis drone programmed for scientific research and 'accidentally killing people' with lasers and power tools. Use her as the 'I don't want my review to make any fucking sense' option.
Zophia wrote: 'Fucking sense?' Is that similar to sex with a sense of enlightenment?
Wait a mo, how are you using the Internet anyway?
Zophia wrote: Software upgrade 16.786.
Comrades, I do not know how to complete this task! I will use this message board to gather information helpful to the task at hand.
Is that such a good idea?
Zophia wrote: Grumpy burps a lot.
So to summarise WITHOUT INTERRUPTION THIS TIME!
Catherine Murdock wrote: Please, carry on.
1) Comic url
2) Choice of character(s) to review.


And thanks for your eternal patience!
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This sounds ridiculously tempting. If this were like two or three months down the line I would volunteer, but my site isn't ready for critiquing yet (either the site itself like the extra pages and all, or the comic itself). Someone take my place!
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Um, ok....
http://www.sparkthecomic.com
and, uh, how 'bout Ben and Zophia?
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Hey... might be weird, especially if there are characters interactions.

http://volet.comicgenesis.com

Warning, my main language is not english, thus the grammar faults and such are normal.

Enjoy.

Also... Cath and Zophia
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http://outtherecomic.com

Catherine and Ben.

Thank you.
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I'm game!

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And lets go with Ben and Zophia

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Okay, I'm up for it.

"The Inexplicable Adventures of Bob!" is at
http://bobadventures.comicgenesis.com

My favorite storyline in the "stories" archive is "There But For the Grace."
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I would be delighted if Ben and Zophia reviewed Kill'er Now or Little White Knight. Sure they haven't updated for ages but you'll be improving your writing skills, eh?
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Oh, I forgot to specify which characters-- Catherine & Ben. Thanks.
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you asked for it.

http://www.legostargalactica.net

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My URL: http://cartoonme.net

Reviewed by: Catherine and Ben are also my characters of choice.

Thanks,
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OK, Ben's reading Spark at the mo while Zophia seems to be trying out links for some reason.

BTW, McD, who did you want to review your stuff? You can choose only one character or all three if you prefer.
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oooh me in!!

http://swashbuckled.comicgenesis.com
all of them!

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Placeholder for Volet review: Caths seems to be crying into her coffee mug.
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Thanks for the review. I'll get around to fixing the archive page.
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Redtech wrote:Placeholder for Volet review: Caths seems to be crying into her coffee mug.
Sorry Cath ^^; You might want to get a bigger coffee mug.

And good thing I didn't ask her to review Evil Overlords United.
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Darkdetective wrote:Thanks for the review. I'll get around to fixing the archive page.
You're welcome. But I want to add, that NONE OF THE VIEWS OR OPINIONS MADE BY THE REVIEWERS ARE MY OWN!
I don't want to clog the thread with my own opinions on people's work, PM me if you want my opinion.
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EDIT:

On second thought, I changed my mind. Please do not review my comic.

(Could've sworn that you could delete posts on here.)

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