Catherine Murdock wrote: No. We do not!
Ben Flowers wrote: Come on Caths, it'll be fun!
Catherine Murdock wrote: I also recall that you said Lesbian Vampire Killers was a comedy.
*Ahem?*Zophia wrote: Catherine: the exact number of reanimated corpses from hosts that BAIT identities as 'lesbian' is
Alright, this is NOT an alternative to Serge's Review Thread. If you want a detailed and comprehensive review, poke Serge till he bleeds.
Mostly, I want to do this is a method to improve my writing skills-
-and my comic drawing skills, by dragging myself and my chars kicking and screaming out of my (and their) comfort zone. So what I will do is let my chars take a look at your work, then I'll draw a mini-comic of a handful of frames to sum up what they think.Ben Flowers wrote: Oi! Limaball is pretty good-
Catherine Murdock wrote: *Sigh* I still don't quite understand where you're going with this Red! Comics are for teenagers! Do you want me to 'review' yet another action hero with bulging muscles or enormous cleavage-
Ben Flowers wrote: Caaaaaths! There's more to comics than just superheros!
Catherine Murdock wrote: Really.
OK, this is how I want to do this.Zophia wrote: Comrades? I am not programmed for peer review of creative work!
1) Give me the URL to the comic that you want them to review (and yes, I want your comic, as much as Ben loves CAD...)
2) I want you to choose who you want to review your comic. Here are the profiles of each character to choose from:Ben Flowers wrote: Heh, I should get paid for this.
Catherine "Caths" Murdock
Ben Flowers (II)Catherine Murdock wrote: Please, Red, if you value your manhood, don't call me Caths.
Look, what you are ain't nothing to be ashamed ofBen Flowers wrote: Gack! Way to rub that in! Thanks!
And Zophia-Ben Flowers wrote: So what happened to your father then!? Photographic memory, Red.
-We get the hint. I'll let you choose whether you want either one character, two characters or all three review your work.Zophia wrote: KD-1166654153-B-
To give some insight:
Catherine is not a fan of webcomics, I can't really say if she'll read your strip at all.
Ben is a fan of comics, but I don't vouch for his taste.Catherine Murdock wrote: Oh don't be so harsh! I'm not some sort of heartless cretin. *sigh* I promise, that to the 'best' of my ability, I will take a look at your action heros and your poorly written dialogue. Will that make you feel any better?
Hey! Bloody miscarriages! Never thought of that one!Ben Flowers wrote: "There's nothing bloody wrong with a miscarriage subplot!"
Zophia is a floating analysis drone programmed for scientific research and 'accidentally killing people' with lasers and power tools. Use her as the 'I don't want my review to make any fucking sense' option.Ben Flowers wrote: You're a sick man sometimes. Anyways, I'll take a look around, see what I drag out. Heh. I'm not getting paid for this, so I'm not going to try writing a novel or memorising the storyline or something.
Wait a mo, how are you using the Internet anyway?Zophia wrote: 'Fucking sense?' Is that similar to sex with a sense of enlightenment?
Is that such a good idea?Zophia wrote: Software upgrade 16.786.
Comrades, I do not know how to complete this task! I will use this message board to gather information helpful to the task at hand.
So to summarise WITHOUT INTERRUPTION THIS TIME!Zophia wrote: Grumpy burps a lot.
1) Comic urlCatherine Murdock wrote: Please, carry on.
2) Choice of character(s) to review.
And thanks for your eternal patience!










