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Keenspace Collaborative Comic

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 2:33 pm
by War
Though we won't be allowed to call it that, it's just a working name.
Anyhow, since this isn't the second sampler I felt it warranted its own thread. So post suggestions and stuff here rather than in the Sampler 2 thread, it's already been split from the Sampler 1 thread once already.
The plan for this is another 600dpi print ready comic, produced by multiple participants. However, in order to give the reader something more to get his/her teeth into it'll all be one comic, just produced by several artists.
I made the mistake of originally refering to this as a jam. This put peoples minds onto the track of things like Battle Royale and Keenspace Revolution. This will not be like that. Neither will it be a case of "Continue the story", it'd needs planning, and everyone needs to be able to do their part at the same time.
The first stage is brainstorming. We need a story. This could be an ideal opportunity for people like Phalanx who don't have the time to draw additional comics. We need a writer or group of writers to ultimately bash out a story, and 28+ scripted pages.

I really want to avoid using forumers as main characters. We can fill out the background as pedestrians, we can be newsreporters on the tv in the shop window, we can be minor characters like a member of the mafia or something along those lines. The plethora of forum don't really work well together in a proper comic. And it's much too tempting to have injokes. Even character interaction can be a problem. We all loved Bobs "Waiting for War" but to outsiders, they don't know what the heck's going on. They don't know what the deal is with those hands groping the antropomorphic cat. A real comic establishes its characters, even a short comic. It doesn't rely on what people already know about them.

At this point someone or a group of people will have to design the main characters, and possibly any reoccuring backdrops that are required. People will be free to give their own touches to the character, and use their own styles, but we need known character designs so characters will always be recognised as being "that character". All jams have this, it's just that in most jams comics are produced consecutively as opposed to concurrently. In normal jams you can get the designs from previous comics, in this case we'll all be working at the same time so we'll need the designs done beforehand.

Now we need people to draw it. I'm not sure how to choose this. There's less places available for this, and it does require much more dedication. It also requires a higher level of skill. You won't be drawing your own stuff this time, you'll be drawing what you're told to do. You may end up having to draw a car chase (though people will have the option to swap story sections if needed), so if you can't draw vehicles it's time to learn!

After that it's just a matter of collecting all the finished comics, and handing them to someone who can stitch them together into a pdf. And then we're done.


Ok, to start! We need ideas, we need to pool the energies of all the online comics ever written!. We also need volunteer writers to start the thing off. I'm no good, I'm not really a webcomic writer, I've only actually properly scripted a comic around twice. Now go!

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 2:59 pm
by The Chill Clan
I wonder if I could be of assistance?

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 3:01 pm
by Chibiartstudios
I'll draw a few pages.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 3:15 pm
by CJBurgandy
I'd love to work on this project!

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 3:51 pm
by Indulgences
I'll contribute whatever I can.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:03 pm
by Humbug
It's a great idea, I'd love to contribute to the drawing side, if I have the time.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:06 pm
by Beyonder_alpha
The Chill Clan wrote:I wonder if I could be of assistance?

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:07 pm
by Orion
I'm sure as hell getting in on this one.


And I may have a suggestion for the story, something that came up in the chat as the result of me, Mercury hat and a few others bouncing around strange ideas.

My memory is unfortunately fragmentary so they may need to remind me. But I believe it was something along the lines of college students forced to sell their services as mercenaries to pay for their education.

Not the most well crafted summary, but I'll add more if I can remember (hopefully someone else has better memories than me.


But no matter what I'd love to help with any portion of this.

EDIT: as I recall, mercury hat claimed copyright of this idea and threatened me with violence to enforce it, so we may need her permission.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:23 pm
by Isukiyomi
orion wrote:I'm sure as hell getting in on this one.


And I may have a suggestion for the story, something that came up in the chat as the result of me, Mercury hat and a few others bouncing around strange ideas.

My memory is unfortunately fragmentary so they may need to remind me. But I believe it was something along the lines of college students forced to sell their services as mercenaries to pay for their education.

Not the most well crafted summary, but I'll add more if I can remember (hopefully someone else has better memories than me.


But no matter what I'd love to help with any portion of this.

EDIT: as I recall, mercury hat claimed copyright of this idea and threatened me with violence to enforce it, so we may need her permission.
:lol: I remember that night in chat (ah, so long ago). It was funny because we all knew we would do it...if we didn't get caught that is >.>

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:24 pm
by Orion
don't suppose you remember more of the plot than me, as I recall it was quite entertaining.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:31 pm
by Isukiyomi
orion wrote:don't suppose you remember more of the plot than me, as I recall it was quite entertaining.
Alas I vaguely remember something about student loans, and working to pay it off. And how dropping out was not an option. That's pretty much it; school kind of has that effect on me >.<

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:49 pm
by Mr.Bob
I'm there. Wish I could think of a supercool story though.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:59 pm
by TheSuburbanLetdown
I'll draw something.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 5:00 pm
by Mercury Hat
orion wrote:I'm sure as hell getting in on this one.


And I may have a suggestion for the story, something that came up in the chat as the result of me, Mercury hat and a few others bouncing around strange ideas.

My memory is unfortunately fragmentary so they may need to remind me. But I believe it was something along the lines of college students forced to sell their services as mercenaries to pay for their education.

Not the most well crafted summary, but I'll add more if I can remember (hopefully someone else has better memories than me.


But no matter what I'd love to help with any portion of this.

EDIT: as I recall, mercury hat claimed copyright of this idea and threatened me with violence to enforce it, so we may need her permission.
My story. Mine.

It couldn't be easily reduced to 28 pages anyway.

I would like to tentatively offer up writing services though I'll be damned if I can come up with any sort of idea. Ah well, if I think of something, I'll be sure to let you guys know :D .

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 5:09 pm
by Spriteville, USA
An Agency that is controlled by the G8 shadow government is sent out to an abandoned oil rig that has been sunk under the ocean by a group of scientists to perform experiements of an advanced and illegal nature, also on their agenda is the destruction of the G8 controlling group. They study technologies for release to the public, tech that has been stolen from the G8. While there the group gets seperated, some captured. The face threats from the G8 who want all knowledge of the now underwater oil rig destroyed, the acientists on board the sunken oil rig, and a member of their own team perhaps.

Plot, action, and some chances for genuine originality.

Seems balanced?

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 5:12 pm
by -Fanny pack
I'm willing to help write or draw the comic, but my art sucks so I'm probably only useful in the writing department. Then again, it's up to whoever it is that decides these things.
Either way, count me in somehow.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 5:18 pm
by Spriteville, USA
On a side note, I'll be willing to write, but it might be too much to handle for drawing. But I can do crazy ideas, I like to delude myself into thinking I'm good at coming up with ideas.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 5:34 pm
by Mr.Bob
Sounds interesting Sprite, although I'd like to have a selection of ideas to bounce around and choose from...

Man! Where are those bloody jagoff writers looking for artists when you really need them???

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 5:49 pm
by Spriteville, USA
Idea!

New guy at a factory is getting trained. On his first day he meets everyone and learns how to use the machines. The second day he does a day of work.

Early the next week he witnesses a coworker (his assigned trainer) get their body crushed by a molding machine (I worked in a factory I could explain some things). He then has to deal with the death of the co-worker who was training him and decide what if he wishes to stay or not. While dealing with death extremely tangibly for the first time.

Idea 2!

This story goes in reverse. I wished to save it for myself as full comic but this could work here.

The whole strip goes in reverse. It starts with the death of a college student and ends with him waking up. (This is based on something that did actually happen to a freind of mine, really sucky story but made me think alot).

It's just following a kid's last day in reverse, so things are revealed in a more than usually interesting way.

Idea 3!

A russian (or site from an imaginary political unstable ex-staelite) nuclear plant and it's employees find that it appears that 50 kilos of nuclear material has gone missing. They aren't sure if it was an inside job, or if it was an oversight. They must decide whether to cover it up, or to try to track it down. But their descisions could cost them all their jobs, or even their lives.

Idea 4!

Space ship, sci-fi. In Deep space (days away from contact with anyone) a disease has broken out. The story follows an ensign of no importance as he sees the ship go mad around him from a combination of sickness and panic. The disease is highly contagious from close contact, but not from air spreading. As the head crew members die off and no one of real credible power remains, the crew struggle to survive.

I'm spent for now... tired of coming up with cliche ideas =]

[EDIT[
These are short condensed versions of what is in my head. I can expand on any of these to a rather large extent, but for the sake of brievity, I kept them brief.

Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 5:55 pm
by -Fanny pack
Spriteville, USA wrote:Idea 2!

This story goes in reverse. I wished to save it for myself as full comic but this could work here.

The whole strip goes in reverse. It starts with the death of a college student and ends with him waking up. (This is based on something that did actually happen to a freind of mine, really sucky story but made me think alot).

It's just following a kid's last day in reverse, so things are revealed in a more than usually interesting way.
I like it.