How is it? Got comments on the artwork, writing, framing, composition, etcetera?
YES I KNOW I'VE DONE SOME DRAMAQUEENING OVER PUBLIC OPINION OF THIS COMIC BUT MY THERAPIST SAYS I'M BETTER NOW
But honestly I'm interested in some detailed feedback because I know I've flubbed some introductions, exchanges and dynamics and in a lot of places, I may *not* know what I've done wrong because I'm too close to the subject.
But for the reccord, the big ones I already know about:
**Alex came across as a bit more Hulk-Smash-esque than originally intended.
**Rhonda's relationship with Pierce could have benefitted from a few early moments showing them getting along better rather than basically starting them off with two crises right after one another.
**High School politics are a patchwork of the 1990's and 2040's due to the author's own social context.
**Things are still a little disjointed between "Adventure" sequences and "Slice of Live" sequences.
