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J3T wrote:fuzzles?

fuzzles.

@RobboAKAscooby:

I would say its a great improvement! The lines defining the breasts flow with the torso's lines now and it all looks much more unified, and less lines used means less attention is drawn to the chest.

One ipad please.

10. Birmingham, Alabama Hehheh, guess where I liiiiive. :D Apparently we have a lot of ... crimes? ... drugs? ... drug-related crimes? I dont know. :eyebrow: it must be really bad there. you haven't even been able to post here in over a year :P Who has time to post when you're fighting for your lif...

stephanie00 wrote:10. Birmingham, Alabama

Hehheh, guess where I liiiiive.

Apparently we have a lot of ... crimes? ... drugs? ... drug-related crimes? I dont know.

MixedMyth wrote:...

you just made my day a little better

I love it! The post-it seems to be a conventional way to make a simple one-panel gag, which you've executed very well. The drawing style is lighthearted, and the scenes are witty. This idea has some serious potential, but I would like to see a truly original site layout for it rather than just a whi...

Honestly, I think interest in webcomics as a whole is probably waning a bit. It's a shame, because this community is one I would love to see thrive. It's a bigger shame that I got here after a lot of people left. We've had a lot of people recently sign up and post in the Introduction thread... and ...

Terotrous wrote:Honestly, I think interest in webcomics as a whole is probably waning a bit.

It's a shame, because this community is one I would love to see thrive. It's a bigger shame that I got here after a lot of people left.

I think the problem is the rhythm of your panels--they seem inconsistent. Sometimes you dedicate a large number of panels in a row to the same action or object, and other times you only dedicate one panel. This can mess with the reader's idea of the passage of time in your comic. My advice is just t...

The trick is not to read it all, but pick out important keywords like...erm..."kindergarten".

Oh so they were combined. (I just thought that I had, y'know, snapped... )

Honestly, I think the biggest mistake many beginning artists make is picking up a "How to Draw Manga" book as their main beginning reference. How to Draw Manga books start with the same basic anatomy/proportions works as How to Draw the Marvel Way, which covers exactly the same ground as the classi...

I just finished pulling a dead stump out of my back yard, and now all that's left is is an unsightly crater and hole in my fence.

If you ask me, I say job well done.

Killbert-Robby wrote: Then I had to search around to find the right number to call (First one was their executive office, which couldn't help me, I needed the ordering department 9_9)

I've never heard of a pizza place with an "executive office".

Pretty fancy.

Maybe look up digital screentones--if you've never heard of these, they're basically patterned backgrounds (very simplistic patterns so as not to take away from the foreground). You can usually find some nice packs of them for free download on google. Originally, they were used in traditional comics...

Killbert-Robby wrote:If actions are stronger than words
Why is the pen mightier than the sword?

Because a pen can be concealed

Long live Canadia!

Land of the, ermmmm...universal healthcare?

I'm confused--is fuzzy fuzzle a noun, verb, or adjective in this thread? Or is it all three?? (Like some kind of new grammatical hybrid)

EDIT:my bad, meant to say fuzzle (spellcheck screwed me up on that one )

The biggest thing I'm seeing are anatomy errors: try looking up pictures on necks (their positioning in relation to the head), and the construction of the shoulder area (trapezius and shoulders in general). Features of your character's heads in profile-view (side-view) seem a little misplaced. Te ey...