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i can only think

"we didn't have the money to put a man in a tracksuit up a ladder!"
xD Eddie Izzard

oh this is brilliant, i didn't even know it existed,
(and i cant go ceck it out now because i'm stick at school and scantily clad cartoons would get me kicked off the system)

well i like the art, about the only qualm i have is that the text seems to jump around, this could be just because i wasn't raise Christian and only have a cultural understanding of what you're talking about as opposed to a more direct religious understanding. anyway, i like how your doing what you ...

i like your inking and your backgrounds. they're beautiful your word balloons on the other hand look like they were a second thought thrown in afterward, don't think of them as something apart from the art they are integral to how we read the characters speech the large amount of whitespace you leav...

your lines are lovely, i just cant see them properly underneath all of the "aquarium" shadeing. this is possibly because i have a dark monitor, but you dont want to alienate us dark monitor people, we have needs! currently the need to enjoy an uncluttered webcomic. i can see that color will aid your...

I have a good friend with the same problem, in his case it's a matter of growing up on superhero comics and an art style that's inclined to being angular. i'm inclined to say what you should do is just sketch women, you can do it to draw what you see but a quick scribble or bubble jointed-stick figu...

i'm going to suggest putting in the swords at the stick figure posing stage. this is so you can figure out where everybody is and how they are fitting together, its really awesome line art but it kid of looks right now like the two figures have just been drawn next to each other as they don't seem t...