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Thank you so much for the comment and critique Redtech! Its a great morale booster to hear I got somethings going well lol. I'm definitely going to take your suggestions. The plan for this current chapter is to try to give a better idea of the strength of the fighters and to give Kaza some goals to ...

Ok, I've been at this comic for awhile now,100+ pages, wonder if you'll get that far. :p Theres some obvious problems I started with, I.E. story, text, speech bubbles in the beginning, these are things that have been changed or are being addressed now. Like I said i've been at this for awhile, like ...

Its been a while since I had a critique ( about a year or two lol) This comic of mine has been in the works for a good 4 years now, off and on production, work and school got in the way however I still managed to get around 80+ pages done and if you look through you can see the progress i've been ma...

Here ya go.




And just for the heads up theres going to be a big fight coming in the next couple of updates of Jager Rising.

Lmao, You sound like me now. When I first signed up to Keenspace I just sat in the control panel wondering where I go to load pics for about a month. Anyway FTP is easy to use, download SmartFTP and you'll see how much simplier it will get.

Theres a faqs somewhere in the forums too.

I did continue reading and it met my expectations, thus earning a bookmark. Now to wait for the Talon vs Ravar scene to play out. Also thanks for pointing out my missing 't'. 8)

I like the comic even though its kinda of a niche comic. <.< Well I think eveything was pretty much covered ( gees I hate it when i get to thread late...)

Ever thought about some simple coloring? and hace you uploaded anything on keenspace/comicgenesis yet? if not, why?

You have some good humor running there. The artwork totally reminds of something you would see in the sunday papers comic section. Your colored strips didn't appeal to me as much as your b&w strips though, maybe because of the line weight in the color ones being so thick. Anyway Good job! You might ...

I have to say i'm only 5 or pages deep into the comic and I can already tell theres a ton of thought and creativity put into this. The colors are awesome and the artwork is top notch but I think story/plot is the strongest attribute. Keep it up!

Very nice! The detail used is excellent and the length is very commendable. You may want to try mixing pen and pencil just to get some really good contrast but thats just me. Keep it up.

The comic is really well done. Your backgrounds and character expressions work very well. Also the story seems to be pretty good and creative. Only Gripe I have currently is the website layout, its kinda hard to navigate. I'm not sure if I actually started at the beginning or not. Did he start with ...

....curse you for coming up with the perfect idea of penguins and ninjas before me.... The comics pretty cool, you can definately see a progression in the comic as you improved while making it. Somethings you could do to continue that is make change up the shots a bit more, i.e. close ups, far away ...

I having trouble getting the drop down to show >.<

I'll like to join if possible. Got a healthy fight scene so far and many many ( more violent ones :evil: )more to come. http://jinoku.keenspace.com/d/20041004.html Kaza vs. Ashan Theres a few other scenes before it but they don't contain anything more than a few punches thrown. http://jinoku.keenspa...

As I approach the later pages of the comic i find you got around to the text thing later.

..... what can i say I think you have inspired me to add gore to my comic. Well maybe not gore gore.... but i can't say i didn't like watching dudes guts get snatched out. :evil: Critique - Excellent artwork and your update speed is very commendable. The plot and humor work great together. I look fo...

Not bad at all. I really like your background for the website and the layout is easy to navigate, though i'm not sure if the way you have the title ( blue and red w/static-e effect ) compliments the comics theme. As for the comic, maybe try some different angles for the screen shots. Keep up the goo...

Thanks for the response. ^^ I'm going to try to get all the grammer/spelling problems fixed on next update.

Not bad at all. I like the site layout and the comic, only thing i'll say can be improved a bit is your backgrounds but in any case having a bg opposed to not is still good. Just add a tad more detail and your rock'n.

Jager Rising High Flying action, World Threatening Prophecies and High School..... Summary: Jager High gets a new student and the local Fight Rings get a rivaling champion, Kaza aka bloody Knuckles. Kaza soon finds that school and her hobby of Street Fighting are getting too acquainted... http://ho...